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My favorite writing this term!! * Enjoy reading it! *
Hey bloggers! So for Today I have my favorite writing this term! To explain what my writing is about its about a statue coming alive! I hope you enjoy it! Anyway, Blog you later!
What an interesting story you have started Rose! I love the way you described your underwater scream, I really felt like I was there with you. Great use of speech marks and hyphens to show us how the statue sounded to, they sounded s-scared ...or maybe just under w-water? Ka pai keep up your great work, Megan : )
Kia Ora Rose this is Rits from Rm24 and I really really like this story because of how descriptive you were and how you described yourself and the statue as well it was amazing!. will you make Another story that's underwater a story that's on land or even a story that in the sky!!!?. blog ya later!.
Hey Rita! Thank you for the nice and sweet comment! I will for sure make another story underwater again! Or maybe in the sky too! But before I go: CLICK HERE!! Blog you later! - Rose
What an interesting story you have started Rose! I love the way you described your underwater scream, I really felt like I was there with you. Great use of speech marks and hyphens to show us how the statue sounded to, they sounded s-scared ...or maybe just under w-water? Ka pai keep up your great work, Megan : )
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Rose this is Rits from Rm24 and I really really like this story because of how descriptive you were and how you described yourself and the statue as well it was amazing!.
ReplyDeletewill you make Another story that's underwater a story that's on land or even a story that in the sky!!!?.
blog ya later!.
Hey Rita!
DeleteThank you for the nice and sweet comment! I will for sure make another story underwater again! Or maybe in the sky too!
But before I go: CLICK HERE!!
Blog you later!
- Rose